I'm just gonna wallow for a whileI'm just going to cryand let out all the pain insideI just wanna fall into your armsfeel safe from harmand just surrender to...
I'm just gonna wallow for a while I'm just going to cry and let out all the pain inside
I just wanna fall into your arms feel safe from harm and just surrender to your charms
But I can't do that and I can't react even though just a kiss might see me through
well it's so quiet now and I don't know how I could ever forget about you
Well i just wanna fall onto my knees beggign you, please come back to me and I just wanna stay here for the night holding you tight oh you know it could be right
But I can't do that and I can't react even though just a kiss might see me through
It's so quiet now and I don't know how I could ever forget about you
Well I can't have you and I don't know what to do I don't know how to breathe anymore
I can feel it now and I don't know how I can watch you walk back out through that door
Well I'm just gonna wallow for a while Just going to cry and let out all this pain inside.
Song Information
A work in progress. A personal song, meant to be simple. I will not likely change the words, delivery or arrangement of this song, but would like to improve...
A work in progress. A personal song, meant to be simple. I will not likely change the words, delivery or arrangement of this song, but would like to improve upon its sound production-wise. I am interested in feedback on the mix and particularily how the vocal sits as I have limited knowledge of sound production, but am trying to get the best mix I can. Thank you in advance!
10/21/14 10:41:42AM @amy-caldwell:
Thank you so much @Gene-Smith I appreciate the feedback, I am so often useless when it comes to being critical of my own mixes, I'm not an expert either when it comes to the technical stuff, so it's always nice to get the ear of other musicians!
10/18/14 11:00:38AM @gene-smith:
Uhhh WOW! I know that isn't much help because this is a fine song as it sits. Lots of space and simple is what it needs to be and the delivery is perfection to my ears and the vocal... WOW! Were I to try anything it might be to "widen" the stereo field a tad. A VERY nice piece of music right here.
Amy has been singing since first grade and writing since junior high. She has worked on big stages and small stages, in bars and public functions and on...
Amy has been singing since first grade and writing since junior high. She has worked on big stages and small stages, in bars and public functions and on plenty of living room couches.
For the past few years she's been mostly doing online collaborations with artists from everywhere, Often providing just lead vocals, but sometimes providing harmonies, lyrics or musical composition and even rarely, guitar, piano or flute performances. Past projects include working quite regularily with Juri Rosenfeld a.k.a Grand Jury (Musician) and Dawn Sinclair (Lyricist) among many other talented musicians.
Though collaboration has given her so much opportunity to try different things and work with some incredibly talented artists, she has decided for the time being to decline collaboration offers and try and concentrate on her own original material. She continues this work when time permits, and is working towards an eventual CD of mostly her own material.
Thank you so much @Gene-Smith I appreciate the feedback, I am so often useless when it comes to being critical of my own mixes, I'm not an expert either when it comes to the technical stuff, so it's always nice to get the ear of other musicians!
Uhhh WOW! I know that isn't much help because this is a fine song as it sits. Lots of space and simple is what it needs to be and the delivery is perfection to my ears and the vocal... WOW! Were I to try anything it might be to "widen" the stereo field a tad. A VERY nice piece of music right here.