Love, Joy, Pain, Remorse
Don't always listen to your inner voice
People passing by on their own
Are the kind of people that'll end up alone
Life is bitter,...
Love, Joy, Pain, Remorse
Don't always listen to your inner voice
People passing by on their own
Are the kind of people that'll end up alone
Life is bitter, Life is pain
These kind of words are abused and drained
You need to make your distance from the voice inside
When it takes control there's nowhere to hide
Don't get your hopes up anymore
The higher you aim, the harder you fall
Don't get your hopes up anymore
You'll still end up alone
Tonight I'm dancing with tears in my eyes
On a broken floor that's made out of lies
Life is a melody
Bittersweet notes in twisted harmony
Don't get your hopes up anymore
The higher you aim, the harder you fall
Don't get your hopes up anymore
You'll still end up alone
Don't get your hopes up anymore
The higher you aim, the harder you fall
Don't get your hopes up anymore
You'll never end up alone
Don't let these words drag you down
You will never end up alone
Don't always listen to the voice inside
You will never end up alone
You will never end up alone.
Song Information
Recorded the 28th of December, 2007.
All vocals, guitars, bass by me,
Ezdrummer used for the drums.
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Recorded the 28th of December, 2007.
All vocals, guitars, bass by me,
Ezdrummer used for the drums.
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12/29/07 06:48:24AM @pyramis:
Excellent tune brother.Have to agree with the other guys about the mix though.
The mixing is an art just like the actual writing and playing of music,and just like writing and playing,you only get better by practicing at it.Try different things,experiment with different mixes,and keep notes on what you do so that when you find something that works,you will be able to re-create it.
Good song man.
Peace,
Tsargoth
12/28/07 11:35:44PM @test1:
I think your lyrics are really good. As one who struggles with his own words that is definitely something that stood out to me. I think if the drums were a little more dynamic, this song would improve dramatically.
12/28/07 08:50:51PM @diva:
I really like your voice, but the mix, doesn't do it any favors.
To my ears, it sounds like the song may be overly compressed to the point that it can't "breath", and, therefore, sucks the life out of it. It's too bad, too, because this song is quite good, and could really rock if you can pump some of that energy back into it.
The song has a lot going for it, and is quite good. I think a fresh mix will make all the difference.
Yeah, I now, I never seem to get that mixing right! And about the vocals, I couldn't find a setting good enough, so I decided to leave them dry untill I figure something out.
actually, I have doubled the guitars and splitted them, obviously it didn't help :S
good job on the tune. you are defintely improving! nice harmonies on here. nice delay on that extended note
the only constructive criticism, as with your other tracks hehe, is the mix. you will continue to improve there as well. that tune floridamusic mixed for you came out so nice. The only thing I can suggest on here is maybe some slight reverb on the vox and double the guitar and split them left/right and eq a bit differently to add some depth.
<p>18 years old, started experimenting with music at the age of 14, and been writing own material for 2 ½ years now. <br />My main "instrument" is my voice, but I'll (try to) play anything I get my hands on, and so far it's been:<br /><br />Guitar (both electric and acoustic)<br />Drums (just for fun)<br />Bass (To play necessary bass-lines for recordings)<br />Ukulele (love it)<br />Piano (My newly found passion)<br /><br />More coming soon!</p>
Excellent tune brother.Have to agree with the other guys about the mix though.
The mixing is an art just like the actual writing and playing of music,and just like writing and playing,you only get better by practicing at it.Try different things,experiment with different mixes,and keep notes on what you do so that when you find something that works,you will be able to re-create it.
Good song man.
Peace,
Tsargoth
I think your lyrics are really good. As one who struggles with his own words that is definitely something that stood out to me. I think if the drums were a little more dynamic, this song would improve dramatically.
I really like your voice, but the mix, doesn't do it any favors.
To my ears, it sounds like the song may be overly compressed to the point that it can't "breath", and, therefore, sucks the life out of it. It's too bad, too, because this song is quite good, and could really rock if you can pump some of that energy back into it.
The song has a lot going for it, and is quite good. I think a fresh mix will make all the difference.
Paul
Thanks man!
Yeah, I now, I never seem to get that mixing right! And about the vocals, I couldn't find a setting good enough, so I decided to leave them dry untill I figure something out.
actually, I have doubled the guitars and splitted them, obviously it didn't help :S
Thanks alot daze!
hey man!
good job on the tune. you are defintely improving! nice harmonies on here. nice delay on that extended note
the only constructive criticism, as with your other tracks hehe, is the mix. you will continue to improve there as well. that tune floridamusic mixed for you came out so nice. The only thing I can suggest on here is maybe some slight reverb on the vox and double the guitar and split them left/right and eq a bit differently to add some depth.
You are going in the right direction my friend!