04/14/10 04:41:45PM @siphaeon:
Tough nut. The arrangement and the structure are pretty good and there's a good idea behind the song. Sounds on the other hand are not that good despite the fact that harsh and unpolished sounds 'can be' an advantage for this style of music. The intro part is quite good both sound- and playing wise. Then when the song gets started there's too much lower frequencies which make the overall sound muddy and 'not so hard'. Riffs work neatly together but there seems to be some timing/playing issues? Hard one to define since it might get affected by the mix. The vocals are well thought so that there's good diversity but it sounds mediocre and what I'd like to hear is better articulation and technique (things every vocalist should constantly work for) since it's sort of an earsore instead of hardcore when people growl/scream/squeel/whatever with bad technique. Also less fx for cleans since good cleans don't need much fx. Much can be forgiven since it seems to be a demo song but still ***. Keep up working and cheers \,,/
11/05/09 07:48:25AM @jackson-hart:
Holy smokes...there are not enough straps to buckle me down from the extreme hardness of this tune! Those death vocals scared the hell out of me! I was not expecting that! Awesome touch with the clean vocal parts...Made this tune a well worth the listen cuz it keep me in full suspense at all times!! I better go wipe myself from the impact! AWESOME TUNE GUYS! pure hardcore is right! Wow!! What a tune! I liked it!! -Gary-
11/04/09 08:27:16PM @:
Starts out a bit weak but after about 2 begins to get interesting, the good vocal mix was clearly the more interesting but I found the low voice not articulate enough to command the presence it was givven and perhaps a bit overused.
A bit more vocal compression there might help,..after 3 the peice starts to shine. From about 320 on I thought the song worked very well and enjoyed it very much.
Tough nut. The arrangement and the structure are pretty good and there's a good idea behind the song. Sounds on the other hand are not that good despite the fact that harsh and unpolished sounds 'can be' an advantage for this style of music. The intro part is quite good both sound- and playing wise. Then when the song gets started there's too much lower frequencies which make the overall sound muddy and 'not so hard'. Riffs work neatly together but there seems to be some timing/playing issues? Hard one to define since it might get affected by the mix. The vocals are well thought so that there's good diversity but it sounds mediocre and what I'd like to hear is better articulation and technique (things every vocalist should constantly work for) since it's sort of an earsore instead of hardcore when people growl/scream/squeel/whatever with bad technique. Also less fx for cleans since good cleans don't need much fx. Much can be forgiven since it seems to be a demo song but still ***. Keep up working and cheers \,,/
Holy smokes...there are not enough straps to buckle me down from the extreme hardness of this tune! Those death vocals scared the hell out of me! I was not expecting that! Awesome touch with the clean vocal parts...Made this tune a well worth the listen cuz it keep me in full suspense at all times!! I better go wipe myself from the impact! AWESOME TUNE GUYS! pure hardcore is right! Wow!! What a tune! I liked it!! -Gary-
Starts out a bit weak but after about 2 begins to get interesting, the good vocal mix was clearly the more interesting but I found the low voice not articulate enough to command the presence it was givven and perhaps a bit overused.
A bit more vocal compression there might help,..after 3 the peice starts to shine. From about 320 on I thought the song worked very well and enjoyed it very much.