I tried so hard to let you know, things were going wrong
Now in my dreams I see your face, Lord I hear your song
We couldn't talk about things then, and we ain't talkin now
I try to hold on and pretend I'll make it through somehow
Chorus:
Travel in a time machine,
take me back and read between the lines
Wish I hadn't lost my place
Wish I could see your face again
One more time
Verse
Your face it used to be so sweet
Smilin' all the time
Everything used to be complete
your hand in mine
But cruel words they're ringing in my mind
Things we said that day ('n I just can't take em back )
Wish there was something I could do
Take this pain away
Chorus:
Solo:
chorus
Outro
OK, I think I need to break this review down note by note here:
DAYM! You ROCK this!
Ok I think that covers it pretty much....
Time travel, wouldn't it be loverly (?), ha ha. Maybe we could all avoid wanting do overs in that case! I've often found it amazing knowing it is all going to hell in a hand basket, trying to tell then NOT being heard. You've captured the essence of there something rotten in Demark with this painfully truth filled song. Kudos Chrintina.
Another fan-flippin-tastic tune of yours! I am loving this one. You have that wonderful grit to your vocals and one mean guitar.
Kudos,
~Dolce~
She has a good voice and it's mixed up where it's not anothere Bonnie Raitt.
Its good I like it. Vocal and music is good.