Daniel Waite
@daniel-waite
@daniel-waite
Song Lyrics
I can smell the rain coming, it's closing inI can hear the tree's rustle, in the windListen to the thunder rollingLightning striking all aroundListen to my...
Song Information
This song represents the heartache and feelings of loss when going through a breakup. It compares these feelings to a warm tropical storm which is both...
you wrote and recorded a very nice, emotional song. I like it.
The intro of your song reminds me a little bit to "Mother Nature's Sun" (Beatles). Good guitar playing! Well sung!
But the flute-part makes a couple of mistakes, I think. There are 2 or 3 notes, that don't fit to the harmony. But that's only mine opinion!
What do ohter "Mixpros" say?
All in all a good work!