Long ago when she was young, she thought she knew how things were done....her random flights of fancy just a game....she grew up tall, grew up fast....hoped her innocence would last, where "destiny" was onlu but a name....but in the darkness, she felt the signs....a growing awareness that she was running out of time...
Her teenage years wer filled with joy, she lusted after every boy....assumed she had her fate under control....she hid away her deepest fears, of being stuck in 2nd gear....maybe there was something she'd ignored....Tried to understand it....how she'd lost her way....slowly coming to realize she'd let it slip away....
There's a fate for everyone, out beyond the setting sun....keep your eye locked firmly on your goal....for destiny is frought with chance....filled with random circumstance....in battle for your heart, and for your soul....keep control....
(OUTRO CHORUS)
There's a path that you must choose....stray to far you will lose....and find your road littered with broken dreams....within our soul an anguished cry...."why we're here if not to die?"....listen to your heart and you will see...your destiny....
This is great! Really well thought out progression and the recording is top notch too. Great job.
I agree I also get a Rush vibe from the progression (not a bad thing BTW). What I really dig other than the energy and the music itself (love the tone on the guitar) is the recording and mix. Everything is right where it's supposed to be and you guys are tight in the mix.
Very cool piece here and very well done. Can't wait to hear more!