album:All On My Own genre:Acoustic streams:49 creation date:2011-01-26
Song Lyrics
what would you do , if I went away
Saftey for the Heart
what would you do , if I went away
Song Information
a heartfelt song for people who struggle at times with a positive note
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a heartfelt song for people who struggle at times with a positive note
01/26/11 09:56:03AM @ian-kudzinowski:
I like the guitar on this track and the melody. I'd say watch your lyrics, sometimes they seem a bit 'forced' - what I mean is, try to avoid writing something because it rhymes with the line before it.
Vocals seem passionate. Good job.
I like the guitar on this track and the melody. I'd say watch your lyrics, sometimes they seem a bit 'forced' - what I mean is, try to avoid writing something because it rhymes with the line before it.
Vocals seem passionate. Good job.