album: genre:Instrumental Rock streams:31 creation date:2007-11-29
11/29/07 08:25:55PM @diva:
I have to agree with Dazed about the way the guitar comes back in after the piano bit. Just smooth that out and blend it in with the rest and it will make a good song great. The raw parts are all here, it just needs a little tender-loving tweaking.
I am impressed with what you did here, and the song is anything but boring. You have some real talent.
11/29/07 08:01:51PM @dazed:
great changes in this tune Jake. It had a lot of unexpeted twists. The guitar part after the piano near the end sounded like it needs a little mix work. Just cut at bit at the 1:38 mark or so to kill the sound from your hand on the guitar.
Good tune
11/29/07 05:39:30PM @john-crafton:
Clock tight work here, well done.
Thanks
Regards
I have to agree with Dazed about the way the guitar comes back in after the piano bit. Just smooth that out and blend it in with the rest and it will make a good song great. The raw parts are all here, it just needs a little tender-loving tweaking.
I am impressed with what you did here, and the song is anything but boring. You have some real talent.
great changes in this tune Jake. It had a lot of unexpeted twists. The guitar part after the piano near the end sounded like it needs a little mix work. Just cut at bit at the 1:38 mark or so to kill the sound from your hand on the guitar.
Good tune
Clock tight work here, well done.
Thanks
Regards