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We Busted


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genre: R&B
streams: 112
creation date: 2011-05-25

We Busted
ErikJurado
07/01/11 08:10:16AM @the-erik-jurado-experience:
The strange vibrating notes grabbed my attention right from the start. I would have enjoyed hearing a little more creativity on the beat/clap, but whenever the keyboard popped I forgot that I was even focusing on the clap in the first place. Overall, this is a very original track - with the creativity that you did put into this track I am wondering what kind lyrics would go with this music - so, I guess I am hoping that this is just the core of this song and it will eventually sound like a Stevie Wonder tune with cool socially charged lyrics and background singers. Sorry about suggesting that it isn't finished - I just really felt those thoughts. I just hear a Stevie Wonder-like masterpiece in this, (thinking "That Girl" and "As" in a blender with some salt on the rim! lmao!!!) Excellent work!!! (so far! LOL!)
Nobodys Son
06/21/11 08:43:58AM @nobodys-son:
Lovin this track.
Ainesha
06/17/11 07:59:44AM @eshar:
I'm definitely feeling this instrumental. Lots of energy coming right at me. Great use of those synths.
songdoc
07/06/11 09:30:49PM @david-c-deal:
Entertaining work. Fine production.
Shane
08/27/11 11:34:10AM @shane:
Bro, Jay i came to listen to your trax , i wanted to show appreciation that you have listened to songs of mine and you have been generously nice in your positive motivating comments-

in this composition, i like the burst of keyboard chord that occurs on the main count. Way to go bro,
looking forward to experiencing your music more. shane

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