Your own-goal lies; small print eyes
Your park-bench arguments; tied to some splintered mast
Those touch-screen moods and family feuds
How did we ever think that this could really last
All those malevolent murmurs mumbled under your breath
You, your sister your mother like a scene from Macbeth
We tried so hard, so hard we should’ve tried some more
My signals strong but your reception poor
The peace we tried to keep was worse
Worse than any war.
Those train–wreck tears; selective ears
Your spit and sawdust, empty pocket friends
Fake platitudes; poetic attitudes
Those bumper sticker philosophies and token gesture trends
Your dated, antiquated phony language
Turning every situation to your own advantage
We tried so hard, we should’ve tried some more
How come every act of love was just another chore
The peace we tried to keep was worse
Worse than any war.
That restaurant scene; so very keen
To be seen as misconstrued from head to toes
A sleeping beast. Our fragile peace
Your jolly, Pretty Polly, shopping trolley bargain basement clothes
I remember freezing in the ice of your despair
All for a good cause but I guess we won’t go there
We tried so hard, we should’ve tried some more
Our loaded dice vows read out like a football score
The peace we tried to keep was worse
Worse than any war.
Man this is a sad song and the lyric are so true to real life with many relationships. The musical atmosphere really supports the sad beauty of your vocals and melody. Well done!
For starters, I love the vocal harmonies. The song picks up nice and gradually as instruments are added and the dynamics intensify. Very cool build!
Ray, I knew you would do very well once these fine folks here on this site heard your amazing songs.
Not my first encounter with this sombre track. Top notch story telling, Ray. Cool track