Tell me truthful, of rolling death,
Machines of wrath, will enjoy your last breath.
Your lies, your hate, your hideous choices,
Give vent to vengeance, the murdered voices.
No viral plague, this world not ended,
You left your hope, so undefended.
The games, the play, the toys of today,
Sacrifice you, in utter dismay.
The past is now, your pleasant perspective,
We consider you, waste defective.
You kindle such fire, such wrath, such hate,
So please do lament your imminent fate.
Ignore, enjoy, complicit in dwindling,
Betray your own, our fire is kindling.
The money, comfort, greed and power,
Forget, dear heart, the gas and shower.
Your ticket bought, your fare is paid,
You will no further, bountiful raid.
The whistle blows, wheels start to turn,
Your stomach will begin to churn.
Your human soul, such defamation,
Condemns you to your destination.
For all the warnings so ignored,
This train for you, yourself adored.
The final whistle calls to full stop,
Your heart and soul does face your last drop.
So here you shall be beat to death,
Draw in your terrified last breath.
Betray yourself, live in delusion,
This fate ahead, holds no confusion.
Murder, torture, rape surrounds,
Our wicked glee, is free, abounds.
No further time we waste with you,
Spite and greed, your fate is due.
Those of us, who did not tire,
Have no regret, your barbed wire.
Perhaps for us, hope yet may be,
Unlike you, we will be free.
Perhaps for us, hope yet may be,
Unlike
you, we will be free.
Unlike you, we are still free…
This is the first time I have ever sung in a piece of music, although I myself would hardly even call it singing, I have also never used professional mastering before, I have made many pieces of music but this one I like and so therefore I did indeed have it professionally mastered. I did not know, the difference is quite noticeable from the original.
I like the track! And I get your feelings about the subject matter. You did a damn good job!
This is the first time I have ever sung in a piece of music, although I myself would hardly even call it singing, I have also never used professional mastering before, I have made many pieces of music but this one I like and so therefore I did indeed have it professionally mastered. I did not know, the difference is quite noticeable from the original.
Thank you Jim very much for your feedback, okay sure I do not sing very well, the primary theme of the piece is the abomination of the Nazi attitude, however I was unable to help myself but to convey the primitive rage and fury that I feel, living in the treacherous corporate totalitarian regime system of the modern world.
The references to the train, were the trains to Auschwitz birkenau, and that each of us in our own way find ourselves facing a similar train.
This song is ultimately an expression of disgust at the mentality of the majority, and the representation of defiance and hope that will not be defeated.
I appreciate you telling everyone you're using AI. Great ideas throughout the track!
This is me singing my lyrics, I did use AI for the music but I chose the genre, the style and the beat.