01/03/11 11:06:04AM @dave-meredith:
Hey... Not heard some Hiphop on here for a while... Beat is tight... cool club feel to the beat,make even better by those synth stabs!!...Production quality is sweet... For me one thing that would make this work better is to put more character into the verse spits, esp the first verse,a touch more swagger?.. There cool ideas here, flows aint bad, just a bit mumbled when alot of words need to be spoke in a short bar.. Its a track that has ideas, has a cool beat... maybe just needs some lyrical changes so the rhymes fit better in one or two places and dont be affraid to go crazy on the MIC, losen up etc... Dont take this as negative... im just hearing it as ive been listening to alot of club hiphop of late due to a project im working on.. All the best with this track and thanks for sharing
Hey... Not heard some Hiphop on here for a while... Beat is tight... cool club feel to the beat,make even better by those synth stabs!!...Production quality is sweet... For me one thing that would make this work better is to put more character into the verse spits, esp the first verse,a touch more swagger?.. There cool ideas here, flows aint bad, just a bit mumbled when alot of words need to be spoke in a short bar.. Its a track that has ideas, has a cool beat... maybe just needs some lyrical changes so the rhymes fit better in one or two places and dont be affraid to go crazy on the MIC, losen up etc... Dont take this as negative... im just hearing it as ive been listening to alot of club hiphop of late due to a project im working on.. All the best with this track and thanks for sharing
Dave