We’d always be recording on our VCR
and adoring ourselves in the 4 by 3 aspect ratio
Mum was always shouting up for us to turn our music down
Cos the baseline it would bleed right through the house
Intro:
Do you know where Dad is
We would ask
Always got the same... response
Chorus:
If he’s not in the garage
He’ll be down the end of the garden
Down the end of the garden, he’ll be
I’d ride the back of your bike like it was a car
And you’d drop me off on the side once I’d paid the fare
We’d be called in for Sunday dinner, sat sweating inside
And I’d be watching the kitchen window dripping wet
Intro/Chorus
Middle 8:
Such random memories, I wish that I had kept
Those stupid moments captured on streaky VHS
Some of it remains and for that I am truly blessed
But so much of it is just stuck inside my head
Chorus
Great vocals but that rhythm guitar sound is driving me nuts. Some kind of weird phasing going on. But, cleaned up a little this could be a great song. Some great little touches in the mid-section and a nice ending.
Too much swirling in the rhythm section....makes me dizzy. I heard an obvious punch in at "on our vcr" and at a couple of other spots. I do like the section where the drums drop out...great vox and harmonies there. You might give the guitar tuning or the scales you're using a closer listen. Something there sounds slightly off to me. The song has a lot of potential. It just needs some minor tweaks.