album:Here...Take one genre:Rock streams:130 creation date:2008-01-28
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I fooled around a bit with this one.....did some surround sound and made it more "studio" sounding.......I think :D
I'm keeping the first one too I liked...
I fooled around a bit with this one.....did some surround sound and made it more "studio" sounding.......I think :D
I'm keeping the first one too I liked the raw sound....Drop me some comments on this if it sounds better or what you would do to make it better.....thanks
Jeff
04/07/08 11:11:27AM @ab1:
damn jeff.. glad to see you reviewing so I can grab the quick link to your page.. this title is my style so here we go.. awesome funkin bro..
love the dirt of it.. this is down and dirty.. I LOVES IT!!! that guitar is dirty funky raw strong.. and the vocals are right funkin on !!! mix? what mix? this is DIRTY TRICKS.. in your face mix bitches.. hope it make your ears twitches.. GET DOWN JEFF MAN!! man is there a DL? I'm gonna rip to this ****.. awesome brother rocker.. I love me a wild drummer man.. and you can play that axe bro.. and sing like a man.. hope you understand.. great wildness factor on this number.. man.. HELL YEAH!!!
01/28/08 04:14:49PM @pyramis:
Sounds better Jeff,but there are still some trouble spots.
Have to agree with Brian,that guitar is way too outfront,and has a ton too much reverb on it.
Good tune brother,just keep tweaking and practicing your hand at mixing,and you will get it right.
Recording takes as much practice as playing.
Might want to back those master levels down a touch as well,track is too hot.
Peace,
Tsargoth
01/28/08 02:46:08PM @brian-futch:
Really cool song bro. Couple of things that might help. Use less reverb, if possible. It may be the sound your going for, but it sounds like its pushing your drums and vox too far into the background. Your guitars are way out front, and while they sound good, it messes with the balance of the mix. You have a good start here. If you don't mind me asking, what kind of equipment are you using to record on? I might be able to help you some on the mix. I'm not as smart as some here, but sometimes little things can make the most difference. You've got a good tune here. Keep it up!
01/28/08 01:09:27PM @mark-reed:
This is an excellent track, everything about is good. No faults from me. Well done
01/28/08 12:10:45PM @tlt50:
Jeff, You're getting there,bro ! Excellent ideas and vocals.A definate improvement. The beauty of this community is the info and help an artist can aquire.You can't go wrong with any of the suggestions offered. Take what suits you,listen,learn,have fun and let the music flow......
LT
01/28/08 04:39:04AM @diva:
Oh, wow, You did go back in and do a remix of this, huh? As I recall you're making do with some very basic gear -- been there and done that, so I know how tough that can be.
The guitar sounds awesome, and I like your vocal on this. There's an honesty in the way you're belting this out. The timing seems to be improved from the first go, and it still has very live sound.
The drums might be peaking a bit -- I can hear some of that digital breakup when you go into the red with the levels, but I love your playing on this.
I would love to hear this done with a pro mix. You should check out some of the guys offering "mix my song" help on the Forum side. You'd be amazed at the results, I think, and get some tips on mixing and stuff.
Finally, even if you can't afford a lot of gear, there are some pretty inexpensive stand-alone digital recorders out there. Tascan mones to mined, but there are others. I do all my stuff on a Boss BR1600CD, but there are others that are a lot cheaper. The thing is, you can take a simple machine, get a good recording, then move the tracks into your computer to fine tune them. Just a thought.
The song is a good one, jeff, and it's a smoker. Don't give up on it, because you do have something here.
The music that you hear was written and performed by me on my home computer...I played all the instruments except bass....These songs are rough...they are...
The music that you hear was written and performed by me on my home computer...I played all the instruments except bass....These songs are rough...they are the blueprints for my ideas...I'm in the process of recording them now in a good studio...I think you guys will be able to tell the difference when I repost them...:) Stay tuned.....
damn jeff.. glad to see you reviewing so I can grab the quick link to your page.. this title is my style so here we go.. awesome funkin bro..
love the dirt of it.. this is down and dirty.. I LOVES IT!!! that guitar is dirty funky raw strong.. and the vocals are right funkin on !!! mix? what mix? this is DIRTY TRICKS.. in your face mix bitches.. hope it make your ears twitches.. GET DOWN JEFF MAN!! man is there a DL? I'm gonna rip to this ****.. awesome brother rocker.. I love me a wild drummer man.. and you can play that axe bro.. and sing like a man.. hope you understand.. great wildness factor on this number.. man.. HELL YEAH!!!
Sounds better Jeff,but there are still some trouble spots.
Have to agree with Brian,that guitar is way too outfront,and has a ton too much reverb on it.
Good tune brother,just keep tweaking and practicing your hand at mixing,and you will get it right.
Recording takes as much practice as playing.
Might want to back those master levels down a touch as well,track is too hot.
Peace,
Tsargoth
Really cool song bro. Couple of things that might help. Use less reverb, if possible. It may be the sound your going for, but it sounds like its pushing your drums and vox too far into the background. Your guitars are way out front, and while they sound good, it messes with the balance of the mix. You have a good start here. If you don't mind me asking, what kind of equipment are you using to record on? I might be able to help you some on the mix. I'm not as smart as some here, but sometimes little things can make the most difference. You've got a good tune here. Keep it up!
This is an excellent track, everything about is good. No faults from me. Well done
Smooth vocals - nice overall tune.
Jeff, You're getting there,bro ! Excellent ideas and vocals.A definate improvement. The beauty of this community is the info and help an artist can aquire.You can't go wrong with any of the suggestions offered. Take what suits you,listen,learn,have fun and let the music flow......
LT
Oh, wow, You did go back in and do a remix of this, huh? As I recall you're making do with some very basic gear -- been there and done that, so I know how tough that can be.
The guitar sounds awesome, and I like your vocal on this. There's an honesty in the way you're belting this out. The timing seems to be improved from the first go, and it still has very live sound.
The drums might be peaking a bit -- I can hear some of that digital breakup when you go into the red with the levels, but I love your playing on this.
I would love to hear this done with a pro mix. You should check out some of the guys offering "mix my song" help on the Forum side. You'd be amazed at the results, I think, and get some tips on mixing and stuff.
Finally, even if you can't afford a lot of gear, there are some pretty inexpensive stand-alone digital recorders out there. Tascan mones to mined, but there are others. I do all my stuff on a Boss BR1600CD, but there are others that are a lot cheaper. The thing is, you can take a simple machine, get a good recording, then move the tracks into your computer to fine tune them. Just a thought.
The song is a good one, jeff, and it's a smoker. Don't give up on it, because you do have something here.
Paul