MoeQuinn:
Hmmm lyrics 1985 & music 2024.....hauntingly beautiful....in part especially the lyrics towards the end ...seems like it is about me.....or maybe I can just relate to the lyrics
since the first time I ever heard your music I have been hooked....
thank you for all you share ~ & I love the picture too

sly puppy:
i confess I've not heard this before and maybe I should have its a great tune with such lovely melodic feel as the genre says 60's art but this is way more than simply that.

the lyrical content sends a message making the song instantly accessible and applicable to the masses and thats a credit to the writer.

The instrumentation is really well handled here - that acoustic picking is never over awed by the other parts which come and go filling the atmosphere.

Whats especially great about this song is the fantastic hook which embeds itself right where it should - so often a song can be really great but the hook is missing this song does not fall on that front.

Nice out section too the heartfelt vocal almost has tears inside it ...nicely done indeed.

Second pass usually where I may add some constructive stuff and that's usually where the artist within us hears how they might have added or done things differently. So would I have done anything differently here - simple put no everything is as it should be perhaps the vocal itself could be lifted a little and the string panned outward to give a broader stereo image...but thats really being overly picky because this song has a great big heart and it's message shines through. by the way the lalalala's section is delightfully 60's absolutely love that inclusion. But I will return to that glorious hook ...simply human.

Loved this song