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Demo - Desperate Man

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album: Dazed
genre: Rock
streams: 560
creation date: 2008-03-05

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This was a demo track I did awhile ago that never got finished. There are plenty of things that could be fixed lol. Maybe I will get around to it.

11/21/09 05:40:08PM @music-odyssey:
Very nice vocals here. Nice changes and well produced =)

04/16/09 06:26:06PM @vesa:
I'm jumpin' around and picking various genres here and there. This I enjoy with your good vocals, fine range. Like the way the guitar comes in. Good lyrics; fine composition. Like the addition of the acoustic in there to give some space and a different pace; good arranging. FAB production. Very good track. Like the guitar following your vocals. EXCELLENT piece of artistry Dazed.
Like this. -Take care. -Vesa.

04/23/08 01:14:04PM @monkey-b:
This is awesome lyrically, instrumentally and mix-wise. Good message, well delivered. Vox are phenomenal, as is the picking. It's got the radio-friendly hook without the mainstream, cookie-cutter sound. Very, very nice.

03/08/08 10:06:23AM @diva:
As a demo, this is exceptional. It does sound a bit muddled in the middle with th heavy guitar chords and vocals. Some of the clarity is lost in there. The vocal might be a tad too echo heavy also, although a delay effect might be cool on certain words and lines. 'Tis a work in progress, so I have to say I like what you have so far. The finished work should be a killer.

03/06/08 08:15:11AM @bri-an:
Yes, DaZeD.I am one who listened to this on the 1st postin...i think it has incredible potential...cause it has all the elements converging to the (hook) catchy chorus (csharp e flat resolve is just downright slick (IMO)
The theme, topic are are set forth nicey with your vocal delivery..
hit em remind em hit again....techique,..very proper.

03/06/08 03:40:30AM @robert-smith:
Nice work! Very melodic and great singing.

03/06/08 01:59:08AM @ab1:
recognize these drum intros.. like mine.. loops.. lol.. but they sound good these days.. soon as the music kicks in we forget about it.. like your lyrics brother.. and you know i like your singing.. lots of distortion on that axe makes me think the mix
is.. but the vocals are crystal clear so it isn't the mix.. just that one guitar.. I like the acoustic finger picking parts a whole bunch.. if it's a demo then I'll just say this will be a very strong song.. cheers..

03/06/08 01:10:17AM @self-tort:
Great sounding demo, Dazed. Love the build up and then drop back in intensity. Very nice sounding acoustic playing and the vocals are just great. There seems to be a slight lack of sync between the crunchy rhythm guitar and the snare. May be intended, not sure. Great tone on the elec guit though. Looking forward to the final version.

Cheers

Brian

03/05/08 11:06:02PM @mike-lynn:
Dazed, this is very good for a demo. The chorus part is attractive. My personal suggestion would be to shorten the second verse a bit so as to build more quickly to the chorus again before the first chorus dies in the listener's mind. Cheers.

03/05/08 09:30:21PM @dazed:
Thanks Stratz!

This is a repost so my apologies to those that commented before.

03/05/08 09:25:11PM @stratoace:
this is a nice and mellow intro..then its rocks..most cool..then back 2 smooth agin....good tune..

03/23/08 04:04:06PM @exithead:
Nice song and great arrangement. Vocals were a little hard to appreciate (volume) but thats due to my inadequate speakers. All in all very nice

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