08/18/20 06:39:54AM @ian-kudzinowski:
I enjoy the music. I think, lyrically, you could be stronger. Some of the lyrics sound a little too cliched or expected. I'm not too into blues music though, so perhaps that's the genre but if you used more imagery in the lyrics or went places that were unexpected I think it could be more exciting.
08/18/20 02:26:48AM @ray-brookes:
Sure like that traditional blues style of playing. So laid back yet at the same time attention grabbing.
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I enjoy the music. I think, lyrically, you could be stronger. Some of the lyrics sound a little too cliched or expected. I'm not too into blues music though, so perhaps that's the genre but if you used more imagery in the lyrics or went places that were unexpected I think it could be more exciting.
Sure like that traditional blues style of playing. So laid back yet at the same time attention grabbing.